Developing Strong Accomplishments

We are in a highly competitive job market; many employees do work that is similar to yours. How do you differentiate yourself? Through the use of accomplishments.

Accomplishments are different than duties; duties tell what you did; accomplishments tell how well you did it. Most employers want to see your successes—and hope that you will bring that same success to them!

One way to think about accomplishments is to use the CAR method. CAR stands for challenge-actions-result. Here are several examples:

Challenge: Accidents increased by 25% over the past year.

Actions: Updated internal safety plan, created and distributed a new safety guide for staff, and instituted new training program for employees to reduce accidents and injuries.

Results: In just 3 months, employee accidents were reduced by 30%–the lowest in more than 5 years.


Challenge: Customer complaints about slow response times.

Action: Developed a new ticketing system and trained staff on efficient workflows.

Result: Reduced average response time from 48 hours to 12 hours


Challenge: High costs in the supply chain.

Action: Negotiated new contracts with vendors and optimized inventory management.

Result: Cut supply costs by 15% annually


Ideally, the accomplishments you identify should relate to the role you’re pursuing. Here is a guide to writing CAR accomplishments:

  1. Identify the Challenge

Start by thinking about situations where you faced a problem, a goal, or a responsibility. The challenge doesn’t have to be dramatic—it could be anything from improving a process to meeting a tight deadline.

  • Describe the Actions You Took

Next, explain what you did to address the challenge. Focus on your specific contributions, not just what the team did. Use strong action verbs like improved, initiated, created, led, or developed.

  • Show the Results

Finally, describe the outcome of your actions. Whenever possible, quantify your results with numbers, percentages, or other measures. If you can’t quantify, describe the positive change or recognition you received.

CAR accomplishments are not just for your resume; they work for interviews as well. Using strong accomplishments—and quantifying your impact—on the challenges you faced, the actions you took, and the results you achieved, you’ll present yourself as a proactive and successful candidate—exactly what employers are looking for!

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Is Your Resume Giving the Wrong Impression?

Employers often rely on first impressions when reviewing resumes. A well-crafted resume can make a positive first impression. But certain things on the resume can raise concerns with prospective employers. Are these red flags on your resume?

  • Errors and Inconsistencies. The resume should contain no spelling errors, grammatical mistakes, or inconsistencies in formatting. These kinds of mistakes indicate a lack of attention to detail.
  • Gaps in Employment History. Employers prefer a work history without significant, unexplained gaps.
  • Job-Hopping. While employers aren’t expecting employees to stay in a job forever, a pattern of staying in jobs for a short time (6 months to a year), could indicate a lack of commitment or difficulty adapting to workplace culture.
  • Vague Descriptions of Skills and/or Experience. A generic resume doesn’t help anyone showcase their qualifications.
  • A Focus on Responsibilities, Not Accomplishments. A resume that focuses only on duties and responsibilities suggests that the candidate does the bare minimum and doesn’t make an impact in the workplace.
  • Cliches and Buzzwords. Vague phrases and buzzwords are useless on a resume.
  • Fake Information. Don’t inflate your job title, make up skills, or fabricate accomplishments.
  • Irrelevant Information. Don’t include hobbies or irrelevant extracurricular activities, outdated skills, or marital status on the resume.
  • A Haphazard Career Path. A work history that lists conflicting job titles or an erratic work
  • Your Resume Isn’t Targeted to a Specific Job. A generic resume that is not customized for a specific role can indicate a lack of interest or effort in applying for a position — specifically, that the candidate is mass applying for jobs.
  • Your Resume Goes Back to the 1980’s. Most resumes these days focus on the past 10-12 years; employers want to know what you have done recently.
  • Unprofessional Email Address. While not a major red flag, an email address that is unprofessional (i.e., hotgirl2005@example.com or partyanimal25@example.com) can give the impression that you lack good judgment.

If you have red flags in your employment history, a strong cover letter can help, as can working with a professional resume writer to help you position yourself effectively in your resume. Click here to check out our resume writing services if you need assistance!

Navigating a Sudden Job Loss

Losing a job is often unexpected and almost always jarring. Being resilient, however, is critical. Here are some steps you can take to move forward.

What To Do Immediately:

  • Take a deep breath. When a layoff is unexpected, it can trigger many emotions — including anger, fear, and anxiety. Give yourself permission to feel these emotions, but take a deep breath and recognize that you don’t have to do anything right now.
  • Retrieve all important work documents and files from your employer’s system. If you haven’t already done so, back up your personal files, emails, and documents from work-related accounts. Collect performance reviews, letters of commendation from supervisors and customers, and records of certifications and trainings.
  • Review your severance package (if you were offered one). Carefully go through the details of your severance, including information about your final paycheck, benefits, and unemployment eligibility. Clarify any ethics rules or confidentiality agreements that might affect your job search.
  • File for unemployment benefits. File immediately, as it can take time for approval (and some states have a one-week waiting period). Do a search for “unemployment benefits + (your state)” to find the information you need.
  • Check your health insurance options. If you had health insurance through your employer, you may be eligible to continue your coverage through COBRA. However, that may be more costly than pursuing health insurance through the federal marketplace, available at healthcare.gov), a short-term health insurance plan, or coverage through a spouse’s plan.
  • Pause all automatic payments. Make sure that any subscriptions, memberships, or services that were tied to your work email or credit card are stopped or changed to your personal email and payment method. Cancel anything nonessential. .
  • Refrain from social media rants. Future employers often search for candidates’ social media profiles, so keep yours positive and professional.

What to do in Week 1:

  • Update your job search documents. The first step is to update your resume and LinkedIn profile. Ensure your documents are up-to-date and tailored towards the role you want next. Focus on accomplishments, not standard responsibilities.
  • Reach out to your network. Let your friends, family, and former colleagues know you’re searching for a new job. Networking is one of the best ways to find new opportunities. Connect with them on LinkedIn. Ask past colleagues and supervisors for LinkedIn Recommendations.
  • Consider short-term employment. While searching for your next full-time position, consider freelancing, contract, or gig work to stay financially afloat.
  • Create a budget. One of the most important things to do after a layoff is to stabilize your finances.
  • Set daily goals. Without a work routine to keep you on track, it may be difficult to focus your time. Establish a schedule that includes setting aside specific time each day to complete job applications and network.
  • Join industry-specific groups or forums. Online communities can help connect you with job leads, networking opportunities, and moral support.

The First Month (Solidify Your Job Search)

  • Enhance your skills. Upskill and expand your knowledge. Spend time taking free or affordable online courses that can enhance your employability.
  • Prepare for interviews. The goal is to get in front of an interviewer, so start practicing early. Being well-prepared increases your chances of success in the interview — and being offered the job! Prepare your answers to common interview questions, and record yourself answering questions, or role-play a job interview with a friend or colleague.
  • Differentiate yourself. Assess your online presence. Do you stand out? If not, consider starting a blog, creating an online portfolio, or posting regularly on LinkedIn.
  • Check out job fairs and hiring events. Attend virtual or in-person job fairs where multiple companies and recruiting firms are represented. Practice your introduction — be able to describe yourself effectively in 30 seconds or less. And be prepared to address your job loss — if it comes up, provide a concise, positive explanation. (“I was one of six employees let go when my department was eliminated, but I’m ready to take on a new challenge focusing on my project management and leadership experience.”)
  • Apply consistently. A steady stream of applications increases your chances of securing an interview. Apply for 5-7 jobs every week. Tailor the resume and cover letter to the position you’re applying to. Keep track of the jobs you’ve applied for and follow up with recruiters and hiring managers 7-10 days after applying, when possible.
  • Practice self-care. A job search can be emotionally exhausting. Prioritize your mental and physical health while you are unemployed.

Networking Mastery

Research suggests that anywhere as many as 80% of jobs are filled through networking. Networking can also be an important factor in a shorter job search. But how can you exercise your networking muscle?

Here are 10 different areas to focus on as you build your network:

  • Networking Foundations
  • Building Connections
  • Strengthening & Deepening Connections
  • Broadening Your Network
  • Leveraging Social Media for Networking
  • Expanding Beyond Your Comfort Zone
  • Offering Value to Your Network
  • Going the Extra Mile
  • Deepening Relationships
  • Reflecting & Reinforcing Your Networking Efforts

Here are a few suggested actions in each of the areas to get you started; I’m sure you’ll be able to think of more!:

Networking Foundations
  • Define your networking goals (for example: finding a mentor, a certain number of new LinkedIn connections, five new job opportunities, etc.)
  • Set a specific target for the number of people you want to connect with during this challenge
  • Craft your 30-second elevator pitch (that clearly communicates who you are, and what you do) so you can use it with new contacts
  • Identify your top 3 ideal networking connections
Building Connections
  • Send a LinkedIn connection request (with a personalized message) to someone in your industry
  • Comment thoughtfully on someone’s LinkedIn post
  • Join a LinkedIn group relevant to your profession or industry and introduce yourself
  • Ask a colleague to introduce you to someone they know who could help you grow your network
Strengthening & Deepening Connections
  • Write a personalized follow-up email to someone you met recently
  • Reach out to an influencer in your field and ask for advice on a specific topic
  • Share an article or resource with someone in your network
Broadening Your Network
  • Attend an event outside your industry to meet people with different perspectives and meet new types of professionals
  • Attend a community volunteer event or participate in a charity event to meet new people
  • Send a LinkedIn message to a recruiter to inquire about career opportunities
Leveraging Social Media for Networking
  • Create a professional bio for your social media profiles that clearly states who you are, and what you do
  • Host a LinkedIn Live or Instagram Live session discussing a topic of interest and invite others to join and contribute
  • Curate a list of recommended resources (books, podcasts, tools) and share it with your network
  • Share a professional accomplishment on LinkedIn and tag people who helped you get there
Expanding Beyond Your Comfort Zone
  • Join a meetup group related to an interest you want to explore further
  • Reach out to someone who is a few steps ahead of you in your career and ask for advice
  • Attend a cross-industry event to expand your networking horizons
Offering Value To Your Network
  • Offer to write a testimonial or LinkedIn Recommendation for someone you’ve worked with
  • Share a job opportunity that may be a good fit for someone in your network
  • Make an introduction between two people who could benefit from each other’s expertise
Going the Extra Mile
  • Host a virtual “office hours” session where you answer questions from your network
  • Attend a conference and actively network with speakers and attendees
  • Send a “just checking in” email to someone you haven’t spoken to in a while, even if you don’t need anything from them
  • Send a thank you note to someone who has helped or mentored you recently
Deepening Relationships
  • Send a “check in” message to someone you haven’t talked to in a while
  • Ask a colleague or connection for feedback on a project or presentation
  • Invite a connection to a free industry-related event or webinar that could benefit them
  • Arrange for a casual coffee chat with someone you’ve recently connected with to get to know them better
Reflecting & Reinforcing Your Networking Efforts
  • Review your connections and identify key relationships you want to strengthen
  • Review your networking activities and determine which methods were most successful in helping you build meaningful relationships
  • Create a list of three action steps to continue improving your networking
  • Reflect on the types of people you’re connecting with and whether you’d like to broaden your network even further
  • Check-in with your key connections to see if there’s any way you can provide further value to them

Remember, the purpose of your network is not to get you a job but rather to build strong relationships to enhance your career through mutually beneficial relationships—whether it leads to a job or not. The time to build your network is NOW so it is there to support you no matter what happens to your career.

Can I Use My Federal Resume To Apply For A Job In The Private Sector?

The short answer to the question is NO. Federal and private sector resumes are quite different on multiple fronts. Here are some of the critical differences:

  • Length: Your private sector resume should not exceed 2 pages.
  • Level of detail: Private sector resumes do not need the same level of detail about your work. Each of your job entries should include 3 to 5 lines of description, followed by bullet pointed accomplishments. No bullet point should exceed 3 lines of text and 1-2 lines is better.
  • LinkedIn; LinkedIn is critical for private sector job search. Your customized LinkedIn URL (not the default URL you are assigned) should appear on your resume. And your LinkedIn should include your picture, a customized headline, a complete about section, and completed information about your jobs. You should not copy and paste your resume
  • Applicant Tracking Software (ATS): Most private sector employers use ATS. While there is no industry standard for ATS, there are some commonalities. Your resume needs to be formatted for ATS; among other things, this means no tables (many online templates include tables—do not use them), no “cutesy” job headings, nothing smaller than 11 font and .5 margins, no contact information in the your header or footer, and of course, key words from the postings you’re targeting.
  • Cover letters: In most cases, cover letters are expected when you apply for positions in the private sector. Again, your cover letters should include the key words from the postings you’re targeting and match the formatting of your resume.
  • Networking: Not all private sector jobs are posted; many are not. It is not uncommon for people get jobs through those they know (or through those who know someone you know). You can mention your referral in your cover letter.

There are, of course, commonalities between federal and private sector resumes as well. These include the necessity of including powerful accomplishments to demonstrate that you have achieved results, numbers to give your work context, and a focus on the past 10 years. I promise that no one cares what you did in the 1980’s or 1990’s—or even in the early 2000’s.

Getting a private sector job is doable and a good way to start is by preparing your private sector resume and strengthening your LinkedIn profile, followed by focusing on the kind of jobs you’re targeting and the kinds of organizations and networking.

What Should I Do Before I Leave the Government—or Plan to Stay?

As you know, the period to decide whether you want to accept deferred resignation is Friday, February 6. If you are thinking about accepting deferred resignation –or even if you’re not, there are several things you should do to prepare:

  1. Every employee should have a copy of their Official Personnel File (OPF or eOPF). You OPF includes every Standard Form 50 you have received as a government employee. These documents prove your status and career track. You need a copy of your record in case there is a problem of any kind—or you decide you want to come back to federal service at some point
  2. If you have been employed by several agencies, your prior agencies’ SF-50’s should be in your OPF. If not, you can request these from the National Personnel Records Center (NRPC) in St. Louis. Information about the NRPC can be found at this website: https://www.archives.gov/personnel-records-center.
  3. Check your SF-50 for accuracy. You want to do this before you separate and let Human Resources (HR) know in writing of any errors before you separate. Errors could include transposed numbers in your Social Security Number, incorrect documentation of your veterans preference, inaccurate Service Computation Date (SCD)—you could be missing military service or service at other agencies—and other such concerns. Be sure to keep copies of any communications with HR.
  4. Review your leave and earnings statement, again for accuracy, and let your payroll office of any issues in writing.
  5. Most military vets already have copies of their DD-214 and SF-10; if not, get a copy from your OPF.
  6. Get a copy of your agency ethics / conflict of interest policy. Depending upon your individual position and agency, you may be subject to a “cooling off period” in your next employment. It’s better to understand any limitations before you reach out to potential employers. Such limitations may apply to lower level employees as well as more senior personnel.
  7. Make copies of your recent performance reviews and self assessments. These will be helpful in drafting accomplishments for your resume and in prepping for interviews.
  8. Record your supervisor’s and colleagues’ personal contact information for future use as a reference.
  9. Remove personal emails and the like from government systems. Do not remove anything from your computer or other files than belong to the government. If you have questions, contact your records manager.
  10. Verify that you understand the implications of your decision. Accepting deferred resignation is irrevocable. Before finalizing your decision, you may want to speak with your financial advisor and attorney.

The more prepared for your separation you are, the easier your transition. Good luck!